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Draw this again! - Meme

So... I made the first picture two months ago and I just re-drew it~

Well, please critique and tell me what I've improved in and what's still the same... Please?

Character belongs to *LouPup :iconloupup:

What do you think, guys? :aww:
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Critique by MichaelWolfHeart Aug 29, 2012, 2:38:47 PM
Holy shiz-mongers! This is bewtiful! :iconsupertighthugplz:
I love the determined look in it's eyes!
It's like
Determined
And stuff o3o
But seriously! You got every feature as right as far as I can see :3
You must
Like
Teach meh
How to art sometime
Because
THIS
IS
AMAZING
ouo
:iconzomgplz:
And
I have around 40 words left soo.
Enjoy
Random letters :3
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ZiiaChan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
definitely improved a ton ^-^ especially with the lineart. the only part that still needs a bit more work is some of the anatomy, like the back legs. unless someone already told you that, then sorry for repeating o.o;;;
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know the back legs are off ^^;
But I think they've improved enough in a two months delay x) I appreciate your comment a lot :meow: :squee:
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ZiiaChan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
yeah youre right c: leaving room for more improvement XD

no prob!
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LouPup Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
OMG THAAANKYOUUUU SOOOOO MUUUUCH!!
AND THAT IS SOOOOOOO MUUUUUCH IMPROVMENT!!!!!! :O
ITS AMAAAAAZING!!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:aww: thank you
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LouPup Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012
no worries :aww:
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DogFwish Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH WOW!! So much improvement!!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) thanks!!
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DogFwish Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome!!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OuO
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Bellanote14 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012
You really improved lots!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!! (=
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WHOVlAN Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW! Youve improved big time, Hun!
I should do this...
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks! And definitely!
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ZabbyTabby Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I dont really have time to do a fancy critique but you have improved alot!! And very fast!

In the new picture you used thinner lines, but also line variety! They are thicker in some places and thinner in others which makes it pleasing to the eye.

I see youve shaded it and I will say the back of Lou would not have shading there because of the lightsource, but besides that you are very good at shading I really like the style of shading you used! Its sharp in some areas and soft in others which has a really nice outcome.

In the new picture lou has alot of expression. I immediately loved the expression you gave her! It seems to fit her pose, like shes serious or running because she has a job to do. or atleast isnt running just for fun.

THe anatomy is amazing you have given her a joint in her front leg and more definition in the overall body. Before you couldnt see a line indicating a shoulder, but in the new one you can! The back leg is positioned much more realistically then in the first peice as well as the tail. Overall the anatomy is amazing! The only thing i would say is the back leg farthest from us could have had more of a heal, but it could be behind the one closest to us so im not worried about that. But the anatomy is seriously amazing like you can really feel what muscles shes using.

I see youve added fur which came out beautifully. In the first picture you only saw lines indicating fur on her head and tail, in the new one its on her chest and butt and neck etc. All places where you would usually notice fur! Compared to the new one, the old picture looks like its a short-furred dog with a fluffy tail and bangs. And now in the new picture lou looks like a fluffy doggie!

The overall pose has a very nice composition. because of the attention the face has you are automatically drawn to the face, then your eye travels to the paw lifting up to the back paws thenn finally to the top of the tail, and your eye is brought back to the face. A good composition will keep your eye on the peice like that. aweosme!!!!

I also noticed the color of the grass is different, it looks much more realistic :)

im no expert but ya LOL

youve improved alot!!! :la:
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much! :D
You're great at critiques. x
This was really helpful.
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ZabbyTabby Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem <33 :3
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BlueberryChill Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I love your improvement, and in so short time! Omg!

If I'm going to give you any criticism then perhaps you need to practice a little more on anatomy, fur and shadow. The hind legs of the dog looks a little strange and thick, the ears look a little unusual and the hair that you've drawn inside the out line does not look so good. One tip is to check out this lessons [link] and [link] on shading so it will be great! Another thing that is a little strange is that the dog looks angry while running through a lush summer land. Either way, why not make the dog looks happy or maybe changing mood of the image. For example, make the background and the shadows dark and bluish, so that the image looks more serious and grim.
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What? Can't someone be angry on a beautiful day? Haha. I don't find any logical problem with that =P haha actually I made it like this because that's how it looks like on the top shot. (And maybe it's an evil dog that doesn't like the sun? xD )
And I've already seen both the tutorials, none of them seemed to help. xD I'm new to shading you know?

Thanks for the critique it was helpful c=
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BlueberryChill Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well yes, but in artwork it's better to match everything. If the dog is sad it can rain and be bluish. If it's angry it can be red and dark, happy green yellow and light. You know what i mean Cx Just a tip for ya' :3

No problem x3
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
c= I know
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Green-Viper Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
See a big change :nod: well done.
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :bow:
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Green-Viper Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You very welcome :-)
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Salike Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow so much improvement so quickly :D
Amazing!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :thanks:
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Paws-And-ClawsKennel Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
how do you shade lke that? its awsome btw ^^
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Uhm, I don't know it just comes naturally eue
Thanks :heart:
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Paws-And-ClawsKennel Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
np. i cant beleive your DATING my cousin...
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahaha I am =P
Why? Don't you think I'm good enough?
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Paws-And-ClawsKennel Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
i cant belive you want too... lol he is wierd
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Huh? No he's not. :/ At least not as weird as me.
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Paws-And-ClawsKennel Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
lawl your not wierd
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You don't know me. Oh trust me.
I am the weirdest person on this planet.
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Baioki Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You improve like a crazy person! ...Which is amazing, in my book! (; Wish I could improve that fast! :aww:
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :aww: This comment made my day~
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Baioki Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay! I love making days! ;D
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Haha =P
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Pinkie-Ponyluv232 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Student General Artist
Holy crap! You improve fast! Like, from say, a 10 to a 80 (out of 100)! Great job!
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RippedMoon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you ^^ It means a lot ~ :hug:
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