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Submitted: August 29, 2012
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Before and after memeby *RippedMoon

Contests / 2012 / Draw This Again Challenge

Draw this again! - Meme

So... I made the first picture two months ago and I just re-drew it~

Well, please critique and tell me what I've improved in and what's still the same... Please?

Character belongs to *LouPup

What do you think, guys?

Critique by ~MichaelWolfHeart Aug 29, 2012, 2:38:47 PM

Holy shiz-mongers! This is bewtiful!

I love the determined look in it's eyes!
It's like
Determined
And stuff o3o
But seriously! You got every feature as right as far as I can see :3
You must
Like
Teach meh
How to art sometime
Because
THIS
IS
AMAZING
ouo

And
I have around 40 words left soo.
Enjoy
Random letters :3
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=ZiiaChan Oct 12, 2012

definitely improved a ton ^-^ especially with the lineart. the only part that still needs a bit more work is some of the anatomy, like the back legs. unless someone already told you that, then sorry for repeating o.o;;;